I am the newly found lover,
Using charm and wit to seduce
To manipulate and to govern.
Solemnity and chivalry
Are constituents of my gentleman's vest,
And so I smile blithely, and
My heart is aching violently.
I am the innate intellectual
Toppling titans, and conquering philosophy,
I am the all-functional.
The fissures of my brain pulse morbidly,
With thoughts and ideas to be made real,
Yet made of nothing but electricity, and so
My head is pounding violently
I am your puppet, fitting snugly in your palm
You alter my energy, my emotions mimic yours
You do with me whatever you please and I love you ever more violently
I am yours truly and completely, and you understand
I can fit inside your veins, inside your heart
and my love is raging violently.
I am the aged man,
No longer possessing virility
But I crumble what little I still can.
No more women, or problem solving for me,
Only wrinkles set deep in my flesh
Complimented by my senility,
And death is creeping violently.
If it happens that you write this poetry yourself, then please, write anything about Dogs for tomorrow.
Please, at least just a sentence or two.
Border collies are the most cute dogs every!
Anyway, i've been reading your blog every day lately and i really like what you're posting.
:) interesting stuff !
I really wish I could write poetry. Your work is brilliant. Please keep it up!
I'll make sure to stop by every day to see what else you create.
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Stop being so cute then writing incredible poems! Haha no seriously you never cease to amaze me. Another incredible piece
very nice poetry, I am inspired by your work.
love todays selection and the picture
Very cool!
Daily rounds.
that's pretty cool
Very nice!
Very nice, thanks for a good read!
whoa that picture is crazy
i'm diggin this blog
Very cool, I enjoyed reading it!
Very good. Keept it up
Like it alot!
damn, nice usage of rhetoric, it almost looks like you weren't even trying. I really like your writing, guh, keep it up (:
Keep the good posts coming! :)
Thank you, keep it up! :)
You have a gift!
very nice
that's pretty good.
I love this. :D
Cool story behind the poem. At least, I read into it like that..
wow, mind blowing poetry.
Another wonderful and deep poem, thanks Caroline :)
Beautiful
deep
nice poems
Your poetry is very deep and well written.
nice post today :)
really good to know about that
keep it up!
"Using charm and wit to seduce"
Loving it already!
Lovely.
Adding my own assessment:
I enjoy the different identities of the aging man.
Great post.
Very nice, Consider yourself to have a new follower.
Another great post. Nice one.
kinda sweet ^_^
such a nice poetry, daily support
You are a wizard with words
Just showing my daily love
baaaww this is reall very sad why you are doing to us, anyway great post
The more I read, the more jealous I get of your writing style. :( Seriously, excellent writing style, mine always comes out corny.
interesting
supportin!
very nice!
supportin
wow , and also cute :P
supporting ! <3
nice post man =)
good luck with the rest of your blog!
Oh...I like this one, bro. I really do. Keep writing!
Very nice one. I think this one is my favorite on here so far.