Tri Duong

My heartbeat speeds up
I try to rid the pain
Not knowing where it's from

There is a lonely girl in the dark forest
On her rests a white gown
Her black eyes pierces through my fragile body
she sees deep within my soul
Life is taken away from me.

She chases after me
I scream for help.
No sound comes out
No one is here, no one.

I clutch a blade in my hand
I exert all my force.
I wake up.
My palms are dripping with blood.
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27 Responses
  1. LD Says:

    hmm this one is kinda creepy :P


  2. Trawgdor Says:

    Wow, this is just like, amazing! 10/10




  3. macce Says:

    Gotta love a good morbid poem




  4. glen live Says:

    i love how your pictures get the meaning.
    you poem is some really deep shit man
    just great, keep it up (y)


  5. sildude Says:

    I really liked this one.


  6. Splash87 Says:

    Holy shit, Nightmarish!

    Awesome.


  7. Was I the only one thinking about a twisted version of sleeping beauty?


  8. suzychen Says:

    Good poem, keep up the good work


  9. OASO Says:

    I wished a girl chased me ;o;


  10. BLUERAD Says:

    thats great, would like to hear some of your own work too :P



  11. Skunkfunk Says:

    awesome poem

    keep writing! :)


  12. netz3r0 Says:

    pretty good actually :D


  13. Saryn Says:

    Good writing. Wish I knew how it should be interpreted.



  14. Nice horror theme for your poem


  15. GKBLOG Says:

    Great. Genuine reader here


  16. Nice poem, I like how the only tag is murder


  17. delphinium Says:

    good to see you today



  18. showing some love!
    keep up the good work


  19. McGizzle Says:

    Creepy. A murderous sleep walker?


  20. Anonymous Says:

    poem was the bomb one of the best ive seen keep doin what you doin awesome, terrific, great job.


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