Tri Duong

My heartbeat speeds up
I try to rid the pain
Not knowing where it's from

There is a lonely girl in the dark forest
On her rests a white gown
Her black eyes pierces through my fragile body
she sees deep within my soul
Life is taken away from me.

She chases after me
I scream for help.
No sound comes out
No one is here, no one.

I clutch a blade in my hand
I exert all my force.
I wake up.
My palms are dripping with blood.
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27 Responses
  1. LD Says:

    hmm this one is kinda creepy :P

  2. Trawgdor Says:

    Wow, this is just like, amazing! 10/10

  3. macce Says:

    Gotta love a good morbid poem

  4. glen live Says:

    i love how your pictures get the meaning.
    you poem is some really deep shit man
    just great, keep it up (y)

  5. sildude Says:

    I really liked this one.

  6. Splash87 Says:

    Holy shit, Nightmarish!


  7. Was I the only one thinking about a twisted version of sleeping beauty?

  8. suzychen Says:

    Good poem, keep up the good work

  9. OASO Says:

    I wished a girl chased me ;o;

  10. BLUERAD Says:

    thats great, would like to hear some of your own work too :P

  11. Skunkfunk Says:

    awesome poem

    keep writing! :)

  12. netz3r0 Says:

    pretty good actually :D

  13. Saryn Says:

    Good writing. Wish I knew how it should be interpreted.

  14. Nice horror theme for your poem

  15. GKBLOG Says:

    Great. Genuine reader here

  16. Nice poem, I like how the only tag is murder

  17. delphinium Says:

    good to see you today

  18. showing some love!
    keep up the good work

  19. McGizzle Says:

    Creepy. A murderous sleep walker?

  20. Anonymous Says:

    poem was the bomb one of the best ive seen keep doin what you doin awesome, terrific, great job.

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