Tri Duong

Boyfriends Cousins Girlfriends Uncles Fathers Mothers Sisters Brothers Husbands Wives Friends Uncles
Amidst a sea of sand and blood,
the grim reaper has a residence
In his black book, all of their names
Recorded as "Pending"
He is everywhere at once,
in the form of insurgency
In Every Nook and Cranny
And all in the name of protecting your
Country Lovers Family Friends Home
Grandeur was promised, but
you were paid in blood and loss
When the old wage war,
it's the young who die
Their dignitaries laughing
all the way to the bank
Sailors Soldiers Marines Pilots Special Forces Security Contractors Rangers SEALs...
All of you are
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17 Responses

  1. RiverKnyle Says:

    Beautiful piece about the atrocities of war. No compensation is enough for those who've lost families in this war, and wars past.

    Hope to see more of your work soon.

  2. Derp Says:
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  3. Sygnus Says:

    Chills, man. Chills.

  4. Splash87 Says:

    War. War never changes.

  5. Cacti Says:

    Man, some stuff there....

  6. Chris Says:

    Makes me feel unsafe.

    Good poem. did you write it?

  7. Hm, that was an interesting way to put things in a different perspective.

  8. KC. Says:

    oooooh...u write that? O.O

    you're very talented

    I can make things rhyme
    day or night
    rain or shine :P

    But I don't think I could make it sound as pretty

  9. autor Says:

    I'd kill to as creative as you

  10. So so true! The way you constructed your message was brilliant :o

  11. BLUERAD Says:

    Very powerful, great control .. of loss of control.

  12. Anonymous Says:

    hmm, kinda gave me chills, but very effective

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