Tri Duong

It's like it's. Almost over
Those days that we once chased are vanishing
What's on the other side of
The door that that separates us now?

I'll try to put on a smile tomorrow even though you're not around
Your words and image vanish one by one
What was it all for? What were we chasing then?
Even now I still don't understand
All I know is you let go of my hand

Now wavering, I still hear your voice
Shaking the foundations of my peace
Your reflection is shown in the water
And I still hear you calling me from afar

The sun will arise with or without you
But the sun in my heart remains eclipsed
Can I pretend not to cry?
Those words left unsaid the many regrets piled up in my chest.
That which I always wanted to make right.

It's like it's. Almost over
Those days that we once chased are vanishing
Right here now, we switched sides.
All I have left are the beloved memories
Can I pretend that I'll be ok tomorrow?
Even though I know I'll be here alone
What was it all for what were we chasing then?
Even now I still don't understand
All I know is you let go of my hand

Now wavering, I still hear your voice
Shaking the foundations of my peace
Your reflection is shown in the water
And I still hear you calling me from afar

Now wavering, I still hear your voice
Shaking the foundations of my peace
Your reflection is shown in the water
And I still hear you calling me from afar

The sun will arise with or without you
But the sun in my heart remains eclipsed
Can I pretend not to cry?
Those words left unsaid the many regrets piled up in my chest.
That which I always wanted to make right.

Right now I have to unlock those chains
I'm not gonna get another chance to say whats on my brain
Would you rather live a life full of regrets
Never saying what you wanted to
Can I pretend to stand up without you?
53 Responses
  1. Trashcanman Says:
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  3. Karl Says:

    Nice poem. I like it.



  4. Dropping bye to show my /s/upport. See you at my place soon.



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  6. SHH Says:

    I wonder where does your inspiration come from.



  7. GiantsMania Says:

    beautiful! :)

    daily love :)


  8. Saryn Says:

    Manly tear down the cheek. I'm loving your work so far.


  9. Tetru Eunor Says:
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  10. Just wow, keep it up. <3



  11. Fate A. Says:

    wow thats deep. ima gonna have to think for a few minutes


  12. The End. Says:

    keep writing and ill keep reading. supporting this blogg



  13. delphinium Says:

    sup man, will be following this thread



  14. I like the ending, bro. Have confidence in yourself and say what you have to say, even if it's only on paper.


  15. ChrisBlaaZe Says:

    Awesome blog. I'm following. Hope you return the favour <3


  16. A lot of atmosphere in your work. I love it.


  17. I hate to say your prose is almost completely impossible to derive a meaning from. Its totally reader-based. On the other hand you set up an eerie atmosphere well. Some may say also that this setting is arbitrary. I think your work has potential but in particular this poem is not for me, and im a fan of the dark demented truth about the confines of peoples minds.




  18. Tyler Says:

    Solid read, keep it up


  19. Did you make this? I feel like I've heard it before, it's awesome



  20. Andrew Diaz Says:

    thats great i loved it!


  21. ihazasad Says:

    you´re definately no average girl, these poems are beautiful, love them. please more :)


  22. delphinium Says:

    hey man, hope your day was better than mine with one of my dogs dying.





  23. iammyself Says:

    this one hits pretty close to home T_T


  24. Getter Robo Says:
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  25. autor Says:

    Goodbye

    I read it through quite easily, nice work !


  26. Incredibly good poem, hope to see more


  27. delphinium Says:

    the one that got away


  28. 12gatsu Says:

    Ah, I know how this feels. The ending made me sad but hopeful. You should stand up, even if you're the only one who knows you're standing.


  29. celerieaz Says:

    Did you take the photography at the top? I really like the composition.


  30. DinoHunter Says:

    Wow,that's some deep stuff.


  31. Karl Says:

    God, I just love your poems.


  32. It's really sweet, I liked it.



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