Tri Duong

Where's my butterfly? In this dream called life.
Where's my lullaby? to help me move on.
If you could ever see who you'd turn out to be. Would you try to change?
If you could ever be who you used to be would you go back?
So I shake it up and I make it up and I watch you destroy yourself
So you desecrate and I elevate I'm trying to help you to see.
Cause I'm still looking back and you've gone off your track
And now you're so far gone yet I had hopes to bring you back
You've officially been lost from my eyes come on and take a bow life will take you for a ride
Is it me who's wrong for staying the same or is it you for trying to play me in this game!
Life's a dream and I can't seem to sleep!
You're in the same body but yet you've turned to ashes beneath!
You've seemed to left the old you behind in oblivion.
I turn to memories when I need some relief!
And now my heart aches cause I've caught the disease!
And still baby you're the only one I can't leave behind.
So bring it all back. I'll try to figure it out.
What I've yet to believe.
Cause you've been flying high all night
And you've lost sight of the ground you don't remember where it is.
So I shake it up and I make it up and I let it undo everything
And I activate and I animate and watch you go.
Beneath the shell you wear memories rip and tear but you can't feel it cause theres nothing inside anymore.
I need to relax, relapse
I can't say I'm proud of what you've become or who you've been.
But I remembered that burning anger that raged through me again!
Life's a dream and I can't seem to sleep!
You're in the same body but yet you've turned to ashes beneath!
You've seemed to left the old you behind in oblivion.
I turn to memories when I need some relief!
And now my heart aches cause I've caught the disease!
And still baby you're the only one I can't leave behind.
It's time to get you out of here. Before you change yet again.
I gotta get you out of here. Before it takes you away again.
Inside you die but you multiply and you change your face and want me to subside!
You modify. You amplify. You multiply. Yet still you die.
55 Responses
  1. this one is very nice indeed




  2. PolishMeKnob Says:

    Nice! Supporting! Keep it up!







  3. Saryn Says:

    Pretty emotional there. I like.




  4. incognito Says:

    Nice, and a little dark... I like it.


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  6. Jawn Says:

    I like the ending!


  7. lulz88 Says:
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  8. x Says:

    thanks for sharing, i like.


  9. TheAntiSheep Says:

    You've got some great talent...no doubt because you've had some great experiences. All experiences good and bad make us who we are...it's all good in the end. Good luck to you! You should submit these to poetry magazines, etc....a lot of the time it's quite easy to get published with good talent, in magazines. I started writing and the first thing I was told was to look for magazines relating to my interest and contact them regarding whether they could publish your work. Even if it's unpaid at first, you get exposure.



  10. Spilii Says:

    Read the whole thing, and I like it. Its pretty interesting and kept me reading throughout the whole thing. What inspired you to write it?


  11. thanks for the tip theantisheep!


  12. Amazing poetry. Keep it up!


  13. Zi Says:

    This is really cool!! I like it a lot.

    I'm gonna follow your blog and check daily. Check out my blog too if you can!


  14. Ken Moon Says:

    Thanks for the add, returning the favor :)


  15. A haiku comment for you

    What a great poem

    Oh Caroline Amnesty

    I think I love you

    -One Hot Minute


  16. Kafar Smith Says:

    This is great ! Need more poems like this ! " Life's a dream and I can't seem to sleep! " Wow !


  17. SMITTY Says:

    very deep poem! i like it, it's cute :D



  18. Whatever Says:

    Awe this is beautiful


  19. Steve Says:

    Im sorry I should have specified its College Algebra its one of the prerequisites for a Game Development degree.



  20. B.Bell Says:

    When in doubt,
    Write it out.

    If you can't,
    Remember that,
    Your life will blow out,
    In the wind.

    Great stuff.


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  22. thanks for all the kind comments people


  23. J Mo Says:

    Please give moar <3

    I really loved it. Also it would mean so much if you could look at my pictures.



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  25. I really like the repetition in this one, well done.

    But again, don't you have anything happy to share with us? :(


  26. Good ending, keep it up. Daily <3


  27. applecider Says:

    you ended it perfectly


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  29. Croyal Says:

    Very good, I like it.


  30. J Mo Says:

    Still beautiful :)



  31. very useful!
    keep on posting this!





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    im just here to give you teh money. don't mind me.


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