Laying in the dank, dark
Of night, I attempt to hark, the
Vivacious angel dreaming
Evermore with pupil`s gleaming.
Living off the dribbling pollen
Out of the lily flower fallen, with
Vehement and fervent intentions
Eschewing falsified inventions.
Lamenting crystalline jewels
Over-obsessive fools,
Verify that one last beat of heart
Every time does death do us part.
D': it's so sad
Nice but very sad :(
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I met my quota for poetry today
When I was younger I used to write alot, including poetry. This is really good :)
That's really good... Why not start writing songs for a big record company ;)
again a great poem <3
Nice poetry :3
nice, yeah it's similar to mine :)
That is good! :)
Very nice poem...
The Daily Soup-port Train is rolling by all stations!
Love !
awwww :)
very pretty! keep it up!
Did you do this yourself? Good work
I went from enjoying your poetry to becoming a fan of your work as I've been keeping up with the blog. You are skilled keep up the hard work.
very nice poets, support :)
i love this boem bro, keep up the blogging
Poem is just amazing...
really good <3
Cute :)
Showing you some loooovvvveeeee
Nice poem!
Beautiful poem. Really touches the soul!
very nice poem.
very very very nice hopefully everyday yields something like this
Very nice poetry. Also supporting.
Amazing poem! I'm waiting for the next ones!
love it.
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I Love love-dead poems!!! Support!
Yet another great poem. I still want a story though! :p
Really nice =D
Nice detail the hidden LOVE on each paragraph.
Keep it up!
What is love?
good post. keep up the good work.
MUST LIVE TO ESCAPE VELOCITY
love, love everywhere!±
That's amazing
Great ideas here!
D'aww, sad yet sweet at the same time
Nice!!! Showing some daily support!
That is good! :)
That's beautiful, thank you so much for sharing (:
Wow these are really good poems, you're very creative.
love your words, they bring me to life every day ~ <3
Another incredible poem! Keep up the great work
didnt read but hers a comment =D
wow awesme
whoa that's pretty good :D
I like how you didn't reuse any of the first letter-words, shows real effort and creativity. Keep it up!
Short and sweet, LOVE IT
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Very nice. Definitely following.
A few lines on my blog too! :3
Brilliant! Keep em commings
Nice poem
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I have tears in my eyes
School may be a drag, but I certainly do enjoy it.
I cried a little :*(
this one's great. i was moved
oh my........... (:
i'll come back for more
thats beautiful
Great poems
Very creative, I like how you managed to incorporate LOVE for every verse.
nice poem :D <3
mind=blown
so heart touching...
nice blog showing support
Love it. :D
That poem is really beautiful :)
Great poem.
thanks guys for all the kind and wonderful comments!
Pretty girls get all the comments right?
I used to hate poetry... it's weird
Always good stuff. I hope you check my blog daily too.
very nice poem:)
keep up the good stuff bro
i'm diggin it
I appreciate that you at least attempt to look at what I posted on my blog, thanks! <3
ps I enjoyed the poem's theme
actually not half bad!
:p
Very nice end to the poem. Well done as usual.
Very nice choice of words, it really shows that you're from paris, each word is like a musical note.
Great poem! I loved it.
Caroline, would you mind helping me with something? Hit me back with a comment or my email (davidson9004@gmail.com) if you can.
Thank you!
Very cute
you are awesome
nice poem, kind of sad at the end, but very well written... You are very talented :)
daily love <3
i died a little inside. TRICKY poem!
what a lovely poem
Very nicely done.
Well done, look forward to more.
very nice. really enjoyed the read!!!
I know it is highly inappropriate, but I noticed I could rap that poem. :X
Well done, as always.
love it love it love it!!!
i just made a song for it.
love is what love wants.
I love the use of
L
O
V
E
:D
Lovely poem.
Keep up the good work
Again i love your poëm.
i remember you for checking my blog daily and realy got your back :)