Tri Duong

Laying in the dank, dark
Of night, I attempt to hark, the
Vivacious angel dreaming
Evermore with pupil`s gleaming.

Living off the dribbling pollen
Out of the lily flower fallen, with
Vehement and fervent intentions
Eschewing falsified inventions.

Lamenting crystalline jewels
Over-obsessive fools,
Verify that one last beat of heart
Every time does death do us part.
109 Responses
  1. PC Games Says:
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  2. Getter Robo Says:
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  3. CloudEmperor Says:

    I met my quota for poetry today


  4. ElusiveLynx Says:

    When I was younger I used to write alot, including poetry. This is really good :)


  5. That's really good... Why not start writing songs for a big record company ;)


  6. Auron404 Says:

    again a great poem <3




  7. Zi Says:

    nice, yeah it's similar to mine :)



  8. Potato Skinz Says:

    Very nice poem...

    The Daily Soup-port Train is rolling by all stations!





  9. Garbanian Says:

    very pretty! keep it up!


  10. Did you do this yourself? Good work



  11. I went from enjoying your poetry to becoming a fan of your work as I've been keeping up with the blog. You are skilled keep up the hard work.


  12. very nice poets, support :)


  13. Orzo Says:

    i love this boem bro, keep up the blogging




  14. Swift Love Says:

    that's something I definitely have to try!



  15. Steve Says:

    Showing you some loooovvvveeeee



  16. Japannews Says:

    Beautiful poem. Really touches the soul!




  17. Gloistina Says:

    very very very nice hopefully everyday yields something like this


  18. Max Says:

    Very nice poetry. Also supporting.


  19. Szarooki Says:

    Amazing poem! I'm waiting for the next ones!



  20. Ishu Says:

    I Love love-dead poems!!! Support!


  21. Croyal Says:

    Yet another great poem. I still want a story though! :p


  22. Shirahime Says:

    Really nice =D

    Nice detail the hidden LOVE on each paragraph.

    Keep it up!



  23. The End. Says:

    good post. keep up the good work.


  24. The Loon Says:

    MUST LIVE TO ESCAPE VELOCITY


  25. x Says:

    love, love everywhere!±


  26. YEP, GEDDON! Says:
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  27. azurebalmung Says:

    D'aww, sad yet sweet at the same time


  28. epicness2729 Says:

    Nice!!! Showing some daily support!



  29. *dadadums* Says:

    That's beautiful, thank you so much for sharing (:


  30. Wow these are really good poems, you're very creative.


  31. Anti-1337 Says:

    love your words, they bring me to life every day ~ <3


  32. Another incredible poem! Keep up the great work



  33. didnt read but hers a comment =D



  34. Joe Dirt Says:

    whoa that's pretty good :D


  35. I like how you didn't reuse any of the first letter-words, shows real effort and creativity. Keep it up!


  36. Short and sweet, LOVE IT

    Supportin' daily.


  37. James Says:

    Very nice. Definitely following.

    A few lines on my blog too! :3


  38. James Says:

    Brilliant! Keep em commings


  39. DizZzY Says:

    Nice poem
    Making friends and showing support
    follow and VIEW my blogs?


  40. I have tears in my eyes


  41. hype-machine Says:

    School may be a drag, but I certainly do enjoy it.



  42. iammyself Says:

    this one's great. i was moved


  43. oh my........... (:
    i'll come back for more




  44. Daniel Says:

    Very creative, I like how you managed to incorporate LOVE for every verse.




  45. robolaser Says:

    so heart touching...


  46. jus1 Says:

    nice blog showing support



  47. ihazasad Says:

    That poem is really beautiful :)



  48. thanks guys for all the kind and wonderful comments!


  49. hamonrye Says:

    Pretty girls get all the comments right?


  50. Commsky Says:

    I used to hate poetry... it's weird


  51. Saveit Says:

    Always good stuff. I hope you check my blog daily too.


  52. B Says:

    very nice poem:)


  53. REV Says:

    keep up the good stuff bro
    i'm diggin it


  54. FIAIN Says:

    I appreciate that you at least attempt to look at what I posted on my blog, thanks! <3

    ps I enjoyed the poem's theme


  55. actually not half bad!

    :p


  56. Very nice end to the poem. Well done as usual.


  57. Flav Says:

    Very nice choice of words, it really shows that you're from paris, each word is like a musical note.



  58. Caroline, would you mind helping me with something? Hit me back with a comment or my email (davidson9004@gmail.com) if you can.

    Thank you!




  59. michael Says:

    nice poem, kind of sad at the end, but very well written... You are very talented :)



  60. grizz Says:

    i died a little inside. TRICKY poem!




  61. Gabriel Says:

    Well done, look forward to more.


  62. MTB111 Says:

    very nice. really enjoyed the read!!!


  63. Tal Zahn Says:

    I know it is highly inappropriate, but I noticed I could rap that poem. :X

    Well done, as always.


  64. Alex Says:

    love it love it love it!!!


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  66. i just made a song for it.


  67. x Says:

    love is what love wants.


  68. Slumph Says:

    I love the use of

    L
    O
    V
    E

    :D


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  70. Auron404 Says:

    Again i love your poëm.

    i remember you for checking my blog daily and realy got your back :)


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